In Depth review of F3 Limited Special Series that is for RENT in EUROPE 2x :)

[Martin Slovakia]

Hi guys, so we are moving ahead, and we have added a brand new Spyder F3 Limited Special Series to our www.ToursOn3.Com Tours and Rental agency in Europe
In Jun we will add second one, the very same bYke and will complete the offer for 2023.

Some of you maybe know that I have done quite a lot of kilometers/miles with TheBeast and with Rykers and with other Spyders.. I think it's way over 130,000km/80,000miles; And All I know I have put to this review.

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[Peter Aawen]

Hi Martin, as usual, great vid & thanks once again! :thumbup:

Buuut, just a little bit of unsolicited comment that I'd like to think might be constructive & little helpful pps: As usual, I watched it all; but I reckon you really need to keep them a bit shorter or maybe tighten up your commentary/delivery a bit? I felt that this one went too much over 30 minutes or so, and going that long in this style of delivery is probably going to see at least some viewers switching off, & that risks them not coming back. :dontknow:

Just to expand a little, I generally like your 'informal talk' type commentary style, it makes the vid feel a bit more relaxed & personal; but in this one it sorta dragged & felt as if you were rambling on in a few places?! So maybe if you think you've got a subject for a vid that's going to run longer than about 30 mins, you might be better off to tighten up the delivery to avoid that 'too long' feel? Possibly you could keep it tight by scripting it just a little - not drafting the entire text, but rather just writing down the dot points you want to make in the order you want to make them, & then trying to follow that order so that you keep the whole vid tighter and hopefully don't go too much longer than 30 mins or so, or saaay, 40 minutes max!? I suggest that anything over that really needs to be fairly tight, much more structured, and have a whole lot less of the 'informal talk' that normally works so well for you, or it risks viewers losing focus on whatever it is you're trying to get across and maybe on the whole thing... :dontknow:

Over to you :cheers:

 

[Martin Slovakia]

Hi Martin, as usual, great vid & thanks once again! :thumbup:

Buuut, just a little bit of unsolicited comment that I'd like to think might be constructive & little helpful pps: As usual, I watched it all; but I reckon you really need to keep them a bit shorter or maybe tighten up your commentary/delivery a bit? I felt that this one went too much over 30 minutes or so, and going that long in this style of delivery is probably going to see at least some viewers switching off, & that risks them not coming back. :dontknow:

Just to expand a little, I generally like your 'informal talk' type commentary style, it makes the vid feel a bit more relaxed & personal; but in this one it sorta dragged & felt as if you were rambling on in a few places?! So maybe if you think you've got a subject for a vid that's going to run longer than about 30 mins, you might be better off to tighten up the delivery to avoid that 'too long' feel? Possibly you could keep it tight by scripting it just a little - not drafting the entire text, but rather just writing down the dot points you want to make in the order you want to make them, & then trying to follow that order so that you keep the whole vid tighter and hopefully don't go too much longer than 30 mins or so, or saaay, 40 minutes max!? I suggest that anything over that really needs to be fairly tight, much more structured, and have a whole lot less of the 'informal talk' that normally works so well for you, or it risks viewers losing focus on whatever it is you're trying to get across and maybe on the whole thing... :dontknow:

Over to you :cheers:

Yes Peter you have great imput and thank you for that.
I did not do this kind of video for very long time and I wont do it again for long time
I wgot stuck in few places you are right, i just want to gave it all to people that want to buy this kind of bYke.
Also my trouble is that at this very moment I was recording 3-4 videos a day due to my situation and our travel for longer vacation.. so I am aware that quality is not there.. But that is the price I need to pay
last last point I came with Tuesday Short videos, so one toipic, bam bam bam and its done.. i know i need to work harder on shortering videos!!!! you are on point!
thanx bud,
martin