Please critique another video

[SpyderSkeets]

Post deleted. The video wasn't very good. I'm in the process of making another one.

[stevet]

For me, it moves to fast and I get vertigo from the fast movements, had to stop it.

[UtahPete]

A few weeks ago, I asked you guys to critique a video I made for a dealership. I just finished producing a test video for the entire dealership. It's still a work in progress and there are a few mistakes, but I think im on the right track. Let me know what you think.

https://youtu.be/Q0aQJEWWHM0

Thanks!

Now, that is outstanding! It tells the story for the dealership, for sure!

[d.o.spyder-rts]

I guess it depends upon what your goal is and your audience. If you're trying to inform viewers about the dealerships inventory, in my opinion, it does move to fast. You don't have very much time to focus on anything (unless this was your intent) and process that info. I did watch all of it but as stevet indicated, some may get vertigo from the speed of the video. Liked the music choice. Dale

[2dogs]

Whoa...........too fast and repetitive for me, but the kids might like it. Nice work though.

[RICZ]

Youngsters will dig it....not so much the older crowd.

[ARtraveler]

I get a video removed by user message.

[Peter Aawen]

^^ Me too?!

[Realtor]

user removed.

[SpyderSkeets]

Post deleted. The video wasn't very good. I'm in the process of making another one. Thanks for the feedback!